One of my first tries at poetry, again *please forgive me*

Heavy Metal Head Bang

The Band comes on stage.
the music starts to play.
you start to sway to the beat
of the drums.
The beat melding with the
beat of your heart.
The music takes you to a
world of sound.
Of emotion.
The music takes you higher
and higher.
Then the music grows to a
wild crescendo.
It turns you into a head banging
freak.When the music stops,
it makes you feel like the bottom
has dropped out from under you.
You Crash.
You want the music to go on forever.
But for that you know you must wait
for another day to hear
The Head Banging Music

wrote on 07/05/1996